Keep Going
I realize that most people will disagree with me, but heres my opinion. It's not what the other people think, if your submission made it through, then it made it through for a reason. When I saw your first and second 'realizations', I was a little put off, because of the lack of animation. Personally, I feel that if you keep this going for over a year, we will definatley see many improvements into something that is pretty cool, especially considering that you actually decided to animate this one. So, keep going, im looking forward to seeing your improvements over time, but please come up with something other than rape for a storyline >.<
I'm giving you a six because I believe that you did put effort into this, but I can tell you could do alot better.